No Tour Guides in Hell: Chapter 6,

Detroit Michigan
Chapter 6
Hallie

Hallie Ruben was furious. No one needed to tell her she was at the bottom of the totem pole when she got the dead horse assignment. It wasn’t a prize, that’s for sure.

A top anchor was riding in the air-conditioned comfort of the WQIP minivan. The young person sitting next to her was fiddling with his camcorder, and her efforts to ignore him were fading.

“I’m not the star anchorwoman,” she broke the silence she’d imposed at the start of their journey. “But they don’t have to rub it in by giving me a Boy Scout with a Brownie Starflash camera instead of a camera crew.”

“Gee, you’re not a big deal at WQIP?” Martin Fishbein looked at the woman beside him. She was old, at least thirty. “I never would have guessed.”

“Jennifer Chambers is the shining star, my boy. She gets a limo, and I have to drive myself. She just flashes her smile, bats those fake lashes, and swivels those–oh, I forgot. You’re just a kid,” Hallie said, giving him a sharp look. “Are you messing with me, son?”

“You seem bitter.” Martin avoided eye contact. His experience showed that satire paired with a good stink eye often led to a slap upside the head.

“They give me all the crappy stories—usually some grocery store short-weighing beef. Now I have to cover a reject from the glue factory that’s bought a ticket to that great ranch in the sky. Totally unfair.”

“Might be interesting,” Martin tried to spin it so her hysteria would die down.

“So what if Mr. Green buries Black Beauty in his potato field?” Hallie snapped. “Who cares?”

“I guess someone’s abilities don’t say much about their assignments. Image is everything, you know.”

“A deep thought from someone who likely started their morning by tossing papers onto front porches. What’s your name?”

“Martin Fishbein. I’m in the Internship Program,” he proclaimed as if he’d just earned a graduate degree. “I’m a senior at St. Charles. Next year I’ll have a full ride at Notre Dame.”

“I didn’t ask for your life story,” Hallie muttered. “Just like my girls. Always spilling more details than are called for.”

“You have daughters?” His interest grew noticeably. “How old are they?”

“Watch out, sonny. Hannah is twelve, and Ruth is ten.”

“Definitely jailbait.” He smiled, his braces blinding her.

“You need to keep your lips down, Marlin. I left my sunglasses at home.” Hallie watched as the terrain shifted from urban sprawl to rural countryside. “Call me Ms. Ruben; my friends call me Hallie.”

“It’s Martin, not the fish,” he said. “I heard they found this horse carcass buried in a field. Must be a slow news day.”

“It was actually a viewer who reported it,” Hallie explained. “They get things wrong all the time. It’s probably just an old hank of hemp. Usually, you wouldn’t see Jennifer Chambers going out on a story like this.”

“It’s a nice ride anyway,” Martin said. “Look up there. A bleeding donut. I’m hungry.”

Hallie saw the sign on a bright yellow Quonset hut. It had a large donut with red jelly oozing like a waterfall, and it read Momma’s Bakery. Her stomach growled.

“I’m going to grab something to eat. Is that alright with you, Marlin?”

“It’s Martin. I don’t have any money. Are you paying?”

“Not for yours, sonny. Maybe you could wash some windshields. Or better yet, sit in the car.”

Hallie pulled into the gravel lot. She had barely parked when a reckless driver in a fancy roadster splattered her car with gravel. Hallie opened her door, just missing the man’s custom Vette. She looked back at Martin.

“Marlin, is that who I think it is?”

“Looks like that dweeb from Channel Five, Lance Strong.”

“Maybe this isn’t such a dud, Marlin. He wouldn’t be out here to see his Aunt Tillie.” She looked at Lance, who was on his cell phone and didn’t realize she was alive.

“Alright, here’s the plan. I’ll go in and make some small talk to see what kind of scoop I can get. You don’t want to seem excited in front of another reporter.”

“Makes sense, some kind of way,” Martin said. “You want me to come with?”

“No. Stay here. I’m incognito,” Hallie said, turning and heading for the bakery. Lance Strong looked up, but he didn’t seem to recognize her. Of course, he didn’t; she was nobody.

Martin Fishbein watched his mentor. She was a middle-aged woman with attractive legs and wind-tousled hair. All she needed was a matching babushka for her denim jumper. But I like her, he thought. She seems so genuine.

Glass cases lined the worn linoleum floor, showcasing a variety of colorful donuts. A red-faced man stepped out from the back room, wiping his hands on his apron.

“Help ya?” The tone of his voice showed he didn’t want to help her at all.

“Yes,” Hallie said crisply. “I’ll have a grilled bagel with a side of fat-free cream cheese, please, and a cup of hot tea.”

“Got no bagels. No tea either,” he wiped a rag across the counter, rearranging the bacteria.

“Just give me any pastry you have, baked or fried—I really don’t care. I assume you have coffee.”

“No prob,” he said, waving the rag toward her. “Aren’t you a little far from Slickerville?”

“Pardon?”

“City slickers, I can sniff ‘em out, ya know.”

“Somehow, that doesn’t surprise me. I think we got off on the wrong fried cake here, friend. I’m Hallie Ruben, a reporter for WQIP.”

“Ah-ha. I’d better get Gussie to toss another batch in the fryer. You gotta be here about the bad doings up north.”

“Yeah, they give me all the crappy jobs.” She accepted the glazed donut and a cracked mug filled with rich brew.

The baker gave her a puzzled look and moved down the counter to assist Lance Strong. Hallie chose the table by the window and took a bite of the pastry. It was heaven.

“What’s the fat content in those?” Lance examined the pastries as if calories could leap onto his waistline just by being near them.

“How should I know? I’d say they’ve got about as much fat as your wife’s backside.”

“Coffee, black—that’s it.”

He sat at the neighboring table, with his back facing her. The phone in his shirt pocket was playing some strange music.

“Lance here.” His voice sounded flat and canned. He looked smaller than on TV and a bit pale now that she got a good look at him. But smooth. Very, very smooth. “I want at least a ten-minute slot for this one, Sam,” Lance Strong barked. “And don’t screw this up. If we don’t nail this down, I will personally see to it that your aged mother dies picking remnants of your ass off the face of the moon.”

He slipped his phone into his pocket, turned, and looked at her. He looked like he was about to say something, then he was out the door before she could whistle Dixie.

“I’ll have two more glazed donuts, please,” she purred. The baker flashed a wide grin. Denture paste peeked above his bridge line, a pinkish pulp. Somehow, being single didn’t feel so bad.

“Around here, some say I’m the guy to see when you want info. Of course, I wouldn’t go spilling my guts to the likes of that one who just left.”

“I know what you mean, sir,” Hallie whispered. “That’s Lance Strong. From TV, you know?”

“Damn, I saw that fancy man from a mile away. I know his kind. I am not talking to someone like him. Now you,” he winked. “That might be a different story, if you catch my drift.”

“Ah, the dead horse. Glad you brought it up. What could be so newsworthy about a deceased horse that would grab a top news anchor’s attention across the county line?”

He looked around the room, then leaned over the glass case.

“Heard it on the scanner an hour ago. It’s not a horse–it’s a kid.”

“A goat?”

“A child. A little one. No one’s saying who it is, though. Just take the road north through town and continue on Cedar Creek Road until you reach Territorial. You’ll be looking for O’Bryan’s farm. Look for the two-track.”

“What’s a two-track?”

“A rut for each tire,” he chuckled. “Rumor has it that it’s a little girl. The cops, they stop for their complimentary, ya know, and I hear ’em. Elmo Carter was blowing off steam to another country boy. Seems a furner is nosing around like a hound dog on rabbit stink.”

“A furrier?” Hallie asked in confusion.

“You know, a furner, from some furn country.”

“Oh, a foreigner.” She smiled. It was like visiting Greece—a whole new language. She felt like she needed a Berlitz course in Backwoods English. “Now that’s very interesting!”

“Good luck to ya’.” He waved his greasy rag, and she imagined a thousand germs splattering on her unprotected face.

Martin Fishbein looked rather surly when she returned to the car. She dug through piles of old newspapers that hadn’t been read until she found the road map. She had frosting on her chin in the mirror.

“I see we had a nice, tidy little breakfast,” Martin’s voice cracked somewhere between bass and tenor.

“I’ve been working. This dead horse is really a kid. A very dead kid. This story could make my career,” she said, handing him the donuts and the road map. “Here, make yourself useful.”

“You’d better hurry. Once the word gets out, they’ll send the real crew.”

“The baker gave me directions, so we won’t need to stop at the police station. We’re going to get the drop on WCRP.”

The road hummed beneath the high-quality tires all the way to Cedar Creek.

“Look!” Martin shouted. “It’s the WQIP crew and WCRP, too.” The police station was the size of a gift shop, and a crowd of gawkers surrounded it.

“We can beat them,” she said and then stomped on the gas pedal. The rogue news crew arrived at O’Bryan’s farm fifteen minutes later. The shoulder was empty, except for one Cedar Creek patrol car. She parked next to it. The insignia was slightly crooked on the door, as if it had been put on as an afterthought. Or maybe it was one of those magnetic decals that peeled off at night and ended up being Bob’s Pizza Delivery.

Hallie opened the road map and figured out precisely where they were.

“Okay, Marlin. We’re going to walk through those woods and see how close we can get to those people over there.”

“You mean that policeman standing next to the guy on the horse out in the field?”

“No, I mean the lion tamer who’s whipping the big cats through the fire hoop at the circus.”

“I see why you’re assigned crappy stories,” Martin said as he packed up his gear. “And I know why you’re single.”


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No Tour Guides in Hell: Chapter 4, Maggie

Cedar Creek, Michigan
Chapter 4
Maggie

Detective Hank Bradford searched through a pile of misdemeanors and the occasional felony, looking for his electric bill. Not much was happening in Cedar Creek except for the chaos in the outer office.

“And you have to PUSH the dang button to use the intercom, Sheila. It doesn’t just come on by itself,” Barney Deters shouted. He was Cedar Creek’s beloved Police Chief, so he was forgiven for being a man just a bit too old for the job.

Sheila Crane, the new part-time dispatcher, muttered a response, but Hank couldn’t hear it from his office. He was just relieved because her voice had an irritating nasal quality that seemed to drill into his brain and drain gray matter out through his ear.

“See? Like that,” Barney wheezed, pushing his thinning white hair back. The on-the-job lessons weren’t making him feel better.

“Yes, I KNOW,” Sheila wailed. “I don’t see how I can push that, and then not let the other one pop up, and then the person on the line is gone and…”

The buzzer hidden under the doormat announced a visitor. Hank knew the commotion would be delayed until some unlucky citizen’s concerns were addressed. Still, he was hesitant to go to the reception desk.

Troy Hunsacker was at the counter. Before Sheila could greet him, Esther VanderLaan burst through the door and stood right behind Troy. Hunsacker had a bag of empty beer cans.

“No even-steven trades today, Troy,” Barney admonished. “You go right back to Dell’s and get your money for those danged cans. We speak only greenback here.”

“Man, I need my car,” Troy grumbled. “I was at the bowling alley last night, and Ernie’s Towing stole it. I wanna press charges, too.”

“Just pay the tow fee, Troy. You called them,” Hank hollered from his office doorway. “Don’t you remember? You called them because you’d locked your keys inside.”

“Oh,” Troy said. He looked down at his plastic bag. “You guys don’t have any empties, do you?”

“Hold on, son,” Barney said as he entered his office. When he stepped out a minute later, he was holding a twelve-pack of Zippy Soda cans. “Here. Ernie will be glad to get your heap out of his lot.”

“Thanks, Chief,” Troy said.

Esther pushed Troy aside with her cane. When he didn’t move quickly enough, she prodded him. She wasn’t gentle. Troy obeyed and stepped back.

“BARNEY DETERS.” Mrs. VanderLaan slammed her purple plastic purse onto the countertop.

The phone rang again, and Sheila turned her attention to the switchboard, making a quick escape. Barney stood like a snow-capped mountain—nowhere to hide, with no place to run.

“Why, hello there, Esther. How’s the old rheumatism treating you?”

“Stuff it, Deters. I’m a Christian and you know it,” Esther wailed. She was as deaf as a post.

“I come to tell you there was funny goings-on at the Reverend Carrington’s house last night.” Esther snapped her purse open and grabbed a fistful of tissues. “I swear there’s more comings and goings over there than a common bawdy house.”

“Now, Esther. You know the Reverend keeps a respectable home.” Barney edged toward his office. First chance he got, he’d make a run for it.

“My dog, Sunday, woke me up at the crack of dawn, sniffing and whining. I let her outside, and who do I see pedaling down the street on his bike?” Ester pounded on the counter for maximum effect.

Barney knew she was talking about the town’s most mentally challenged citizen, Fly Carrington. Who just happened to be the helpless child of the widower, Reverend Carrington. He played dumb. He wanted to say, “Hi, Fly.” But he held his tongue.

“Reverend Carrington riding a bicycle?”

“Not the preacher, you old windbag. Get the wool out of your ears.” Esther was shouting, and this wouldn’t seem so strange if she had teeth. As it was, she was barely intelligible with her lips flapping like window shades. Hank peeked out of the office, worried that Esther’s head might start spinning and fly clean off.

“Hey, Mrs. VanderLaan,” Hank said.

“I’m not paying for you to mow my lawn, sonny,” she shot back. “And then, after Fly Carrington came up the road, Mike O’Bryan pulled out of the driveway next to the church cemetery. Now I ask you, what are those two up to in the darn middle of the night?”

“Maybe it was a conspiracy,” Hank said, grinning. He was surprised she didn’t vault over the counter and bash his brains in with her cane.

“I was watching that Carrington boy, Barney Deters. Neat as you please, the little piss-ant opened the basement window and slipped down smoothly. You mark my words; he’s probably out raping and pillaging.” Esther patted her brow with the wad of tissues. “A person’s not safe in their own home ‘round here. Lord knows what that drunk, O’Bryan, was up to.”

“You know Fly’s harmless, Esther. He wouldn’t hurt anyone,” Barney reassured her. “And Mike may tip a few, but he’s got no record.”

“Well, I never. I said nothing at all about your fly, Barney Deters.” She grabbed her purse and slammed the door so hard that it made the calendar on the wall shift askew.

“Looney tunes old broad,” someone whispered.

“Uh, can I cut in here for a minute?” Sheila asked. Her headset hung crooked. Hank grabbed a cup of coffee from the ancient coffee maker.

“Steve’s on the phone.” Brooks was a rookie and the only road officer employed by the City of Cedar Creek.

“And? Well, what? Are you going to tell me, or is this a game of twenty questions?” Barney snarled slightly.

Hank interrupted. “What does Steve need, Sheila?”

“He’s at the O’Bryan place. It’s about that horsetail sticking out of the ground. Turns out there’s a dead body out there.”

“Great Grandma’s panties, can’t they tell the difference between a horse and a person?” Barney barked.

“Well, why don’t you just ask him yourself?” Sheila wished she were back at Thunderdog Lanes, handing out rented bowling shoes that reeked of foot gas.

Barney pressed the speaker button, and Hank came over to listen in.

“Yeah, Steve. Go ahead and tell us.”

“Sir, it’s a little redheaded girl. She’s buried up to the topknot,” Steve coughed nervously. “Sir, what should I do? Over.”

“Hold the fort, Brooks. Don’t let the civvies touch anything. Hank and I will be right out. And quit saying ‘over’. It makes you sound like some rookie jerk.” Barney looked at Hank, who was examining flotsam in his coffee.

“Some evil SOBs got to pull off a big city crime and dump it out here in the wilderness, like we don’t have enough problems,” Barney fished for his keys.

Hank’s mood was downcast.

“This is going to be terrible for the folks around here. We’d better get out there in a darn hurry and act like we know what we’re doing,” Hank said, itching for a cigarette. “We don’t have any missing kids around here, so it must be a kid from another county.”

“Or state. Like I said, if some maniac is dumping victims in our jurisdiction, it makes us look bad. God Almighty, a kid—that’s beyond evil. What’s this world coming to?”

“It’s Armageddon, Barn. Look, they have us surrounded like the Alamo,” Hank said as he stared out the front window. “It’s the scanner crowd. You’d think people would have better things to do than gather around those annoying squelching machines, waiting for the next human tragedy to be announced.”

“At least the press isn’t aware of it yet.” Barney grabbed a few items, including a couple of rolls of crime scene tape. “Hank?”

“Yeah, boss,” he replied.

“Don’t you think it’s kind of strange that O’Bryan was out late last night and a body was found on his farm?”

“I guess it is, Barney. But Fly Carrington bikes out that way all the time. He was out last night as well. Meet you in the car.”

Hank looked around his office and spotted his shotgun propped in the corner with a plastic grocery bag hanging from its sight. He grabbed the weapon, slipped a pack of hidden cigarettes from the drawer, and headed for the cruiser. He ignored the shouts from the scanner buzzards and looky-loos.

“Let’s go!” Hank muttered, slamming the door of the car.

Barney jerked the wheel quickly away from the curb and accelerated.

“Son of a bitch, Deters. You drive like an old man with a hat.”

Barney looked at his friend and grinned. He winked at Hank before letting out a deadly fart.

“Hear the horn?” Barney’s eyes twinkled. “It’s Gabriel calling your name!”


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Omega Consensus: No Tour Guides in Hell, Prologue

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PROLOGUE

From behind a boulder, George Ho shielded his eyes. A small cloud of dust rose on the road; a faint low rumble could be heard. Someone was approaching, coming this way.

“Son of a bitch,” he muttered, glancing behind him. Thankfully, his granddaughter, Aimee, was out of earshot. His grip tightened on the shotgun, and though he didn’t raise it, he was ready.

“I haven’t seen action like this since the old days,” Ho murmured.

The motorcycle came to a sudden stop just twenty yards from him, kicking up loose gravel. The helmeted rider looked quite unfriendly, and George was hesitant to face a confrontation. The old man was not much help, even with a weapon. He backed up the sidewalk; his foot slipped in the mud. The stranger noticed him.

“Lefty,” the rider shouted. “Hey, old man, don’t you remember me?”

No one called him Lefty anymore, at least not that often.

“Who the hell are you?” he shouted back. “And where did you get gasoline?”

“You son of a gun! It’s been a minute.” The rider tore off his helmet. His once ebony hair now had streaks of white. George relaxed a little. Jake Barnes still wore the rakish grin that made Senator Willson’s wife swoon.

Jake slammed his kickstand into the dirt, leaving his bike amid a cloud of dust hanging in the air.

“Well, I’ll be. Jake, you old hound dog.” George’s voice wasn’t friendly, nor was it a snarl. “What in the Sam Hill are you doing in Utah?”

“Little of this—little of that. Doing odd jobs on the side,” Jake smiled.

George Ho gave his old colleague a once-over. Jake didn’t look a day over 40, and that was a mystery.

“You been taking a bath in the Fountain of Youth, boy?”

“Nah, I’m pretty much over the hill. These old bones ache like a bad tooth.” Barnes brushed off his pant legs and sat on a mossy berm along the creek bank. “I heard you’d settled out here. It’s nice.”

“Yeah, it is. Where on God’s earth did you find gasoline, you shifty son of a bitch?”

“I’ve got some friends who got lucky. We have a supply that should last for a while.”

“I haven’t seen gasoline in years—land sakes, it’s been five years if it’s a day.” George walked over to Jake’s vintage Harley and ran his hand along the engine—it’s as hot as a damn cook stove.

“Haven’t heard the sound of an engine in so long; I almost forgot what it sounded like.”

“Gasoline is very scarce. You’ve got to trade a lot of goods to get a gallon. It doesn’t matter, though. Not many folks have a working vehicle anymore. When I passed through Tennessee, I saw a family living in a pile of cars welded together. Made quite a cozy little cottage.”

“That’s strange. Someone’s newfangled idea of a mobile home, I suppose.”

“You can’t fully understand people. Did you know some are living in dugouts carved into the side of a hill? Guess they don’t have to worry about a twister destroying their home.”

“Great idea for hill country, but some parts are really flat.”

“True, but an old cellar works for them. A bit on the dark side, but what the hell. How are you doing, Lefty? Are you well defended?”

“I can’t get used to that Lefty thing. Nobody’s called me that in years. Why do you ask about defenses, Jake? Are you planning to raid our canned peaches? Or are you after bigger game—like the old days?”

“There are bands of thieves and troublemakers around here, Lefty,” Jake’s eyes narrowed. “I don’t remember you being squeamish about a little violence now and then. Back in the day, you were a pretty good shot.”

“You’re out of line, Jake. The old days are gone. Nothing much happens around here. We’re a peaceful group. Sometimes an outsider comes looking to steal a cow or pig, but mostly folks just keep to themselves.”

“The Eastern Reserve has reinstated the mail system. Do you all have it?”

“Nope, word of mouth works just fine for us. I don’t miss it—no bills and no damn tax man. The government snoops are out of commission, no offense, of course.”

“Sure, none taken. I heard Nick Blake lives around here. Have you seen him?” Jake kept his voice steady, so no inflection would tip the old man off.

“He’s around. Been working on setting up a new government. He’s gathered quite a few young guys for a Western Reserve militia.”

“Do you know where I can find him?”

“Maybe. He’s still the big boss. I guess once a President, always a President. He doesn’t have a title yet because we haven’t ratified a constitution. Funny thing is, these days people don’t care much for politics, which makes it hard to get them to leave their fields.”

“I’ve heard that. People say Blake is an approachable guy.”

“He rolls up his shirtsleeves and bales hay like the rest of us.” George watched as Jake took off his boots and submerged his feet in the murky water.

“Jake, lift your feet up.” The detective in him came as naturally as a burp after a cold beer. George’s fingers clenched around his gun. He felt like Lefty Ho again.

“Why?” Jake asked, but he quickly pulled his feet out of the water anyway. His cuffs spilled their water, and his strong calves looked shiny. The old man’s eyes locked onto Jake’s foot, and he turned as pale as an Asian man can get.

“You aren’t Jake Barnes,” George Ho said. He stood and aimed at the stranger who looked like Jake’s twin. “Who are you?”

“I’m Jake. I recognized you, didn’t I?”

“Get off my land,” George ordered. “Get your ass off my creek bank and haul that Harley back to whatever Hell you rode in from.”

“You’ve turned into a real gasbag, Lefty. I guess you deserve everything you get.” Jake shoved his wet feet back into his boots. He stomped off and mounted his dirt-encrusted road bike.

“And don’t come back,” George shouted. He fired a blast over the pseudo-Jake’s head. Then he heard a sound behind him and spun around, aiming the gun directly at his granddaughter’s pretty head.

“Good God, Aimee. I almost took your head off. You shouldn’t be here. Get home.”

“Grandpa, you’re such a grump. Why were you upset with that man?”

“That’s not a man,” Ho replied. “That’s a demon from Hell, and I sent him packing.”

“You said he wasn’t Jake Barnes. How did you know?” Aimee persisted.

“Because the real Jake Barnes lost his big toe to a shotgun blast years ago. And unless there’s some new-fangled regeneration technique I don’t know about, he’s what we used to call a dead ringer.” The air felt heavy as Lefty sighed. “That fellow had every one of his little piggies intact.”

The Harley coughed up a cloud of dust. Barnes was gone, winding his way through the hills back to the netherworld.

“Grandpa, are you scared?” Aimee asks as she slips the frog into her pocket.

“Someone walked over my grave, little one.”

He took a deep breath and knelt next to Aimee. “Do you have plans for that froggy?”

George Ho’s twelve-year-old granddaughter was his only child’s only child, Evan, who had passed away. He could see a faint memory of his son’s eyes when Aimee looked at him. His heart ached.

“That creature doesn’t look very happy, Aimee.”

“I’m going to keep him.”

“Don’t you think he might prefer his lily pad over the shoebox in your closet?”

“Oh, Grandpa,” Aimee sighed as the frog struggled.

“Frogs don’t like being shoved into pockets, boxes, or jars. And neither do people.”

“I don’t have anyone in my pocket,” Aimee giggled. “A person wouldn’t fit. Why did that man call you Lefty?”

“He called me Lefty because of this.” The old man waved the stump that used to be a hand with fingers. “Lost it in a mine accident in Angola. Blew my nose pickers clean off.”

“Grandpa, that’s terrible. Anyway,” she said. “Tell me about the Great Fall.” She sat at his feet, her long black hair forming a curtain around her slender, golden frame.

A cluster of gray nimbostrati collided with a black wall of rain somewhere near the mountains. Thunder echoed through the canyon, and the wind picked up.

“See the clouds stirring? It was the same way back then. A thunderstorm was forming, but we were all busy with our lives and got caught without our umbrellas. It’s kind of like what will happen if we don’t get up to the house.”

“I hate storms. Boogeymen come out whenever there’s lightning.”

“In the old days, boogeymen walked among us, Aimee. They were right under our noses”.

“Like Jake Barnes?”

“He was one of the good guys. But I’d bet my next harvest that he’s turned as bad as a cracked egg on a hot day. There’s something nasty afoot.”

“Because he grew a toe back?”

“Exactly. That’s not doable, is it? Plus, there’s been an unsettled vibe lately, and I really don’t like it.”

“Tell me everything about the clones, Grandpa. Tell me about Azara’s Land and Digby Brown.”

“You’d be fast asleep before I was finished,” George replied. “Anyway, I think your mother should tell you. I’m swamped.”

“You’re as unbusy as my frog,” Aimee laughed. The object of her affection was splayed out on a lily pad and looked half dead. “Tell me the beginning, Grandpa. Then tomorrow you can tell me the middle, and the next day you can tell me the end.”

“Why don’t you just ask me why the Earth doesn’t spin out of its orbit and hit the Sun?”

“Okay? Why?”

“I give up. Okay, it all started with a little girl named Sarah, and without her… well, who knows what might have happened? Her death was like a stone rolling down a hill. The whole thing picked up speed and kicked up plenty of debris along the way. Once things started to fall apart, there was no stopping them.”

“Sarah’s name was really Azara, I know that,” Aimee said. “She was a little redheaded girl.”

“That’s true.”

In the distance, George Ho saw his daughter-in-law, Helena. She stood on the back porch, waving her dish towel to get their attention.

“You get home, Aimee. I’ll be there in a minute.”

“Okay, but I want to hear about Sarah and Sanctuary as a bedtime story. And about Natagna.” Aimee rushed to the house, leaving George to wrestle with the dragons of his past.

The old man crouched on the steep bank. The pond reflected the darkness of the sky and his thoughts. He zipped a blade of grass between his lips and tasted the bitterness of the weed. Like a rusty pipe with a slow leak, unwelcome memories seeped into the stew of his thoughts.

He’d been just an ordinary detective. It was a routine murder case. Thoughts of the past dragged him into a swamp of memories that pulled him back to those dangerous days before the Great Fall.


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Introducing Omega Consensus

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The Omega Consensus was supposed to be hope, a blueprint for a better tomorrow. Instead, it became a weapon—twisted, silent, and deadly. Blackmail runs through its veins. Greed drives its pulse. No one knows how long it’s been compromised. No one’s talking. Oil prices spike. Fingers point. And in the shadows, Al Amorta Ujung waits—an extortionist syndicate with its sights set on the throat of the United States. They don’t want money. They want control. And they’re willing to burn the world to get it.

Monty and McCluskey – Two writers present their novel, Omega Consensus: No Tour Guides in Hell, on this website in serial form free of charge. Follow and be sure to subscribe so you’ll get notice when new chapters are published. The Prologue and several chapters are live now.